Hidden Volcano

By Linda

Rating: PG

Genres: romance

Keywords: brainwashing

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Buried beneath

Centuries of discipline

Under layer upon layer

Of discontent,

The passionate Vulcan resides

Waiting to erupt

 

Like her planet

Beneath the sandy crust

Under the hot mantle 

Deep passions bubble,

Endlessly simmering

At the core

 

Human catalyst!

Repress...

Your engaging eyes

Your come hither smile

Your inflection-filled voice,

Your eldritch allure

 

before it is...

 

 

too late

 

 

 

 

 


Comments:

Distracted

Very nice!

panyasan

This poem moves like a Vulcano, waiting to erupt. Great poem.

Reanok

Well done Linda this a very goos lok at T'Pol's hidden feelings for Trip.This is an excellent look into her character.

Dinah

This is really terrific, Linda!  It says so much about T'Pol and her relationship with Trip in only a few short words.  Marvelous!

Asso

DAMN! That's passion, Linda! Very hard, hot, high passion, Linda!

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