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Kevin Thomas Riley wrote:Whatever you decide to do, there is one rather important plot point in Carpenter Street that has consequences for the overall arc that has to be addressed. Namely that Archer used the Xindi bodies and equipment he got hold of in this episode to convince Degra to break with the other Xindi later on.
panyasan wrote:This is fun! Let me see, Archer and T'Pol do go back to 2004. But instead of being onseen by the Rep. capture Archer and decide he is their guinea pig for their experiment with virus they want to use against Earth. While Archer is fighting for his life on his sick bed, T'Pol is confronted with two noisy police officers, who think she is the bad guy. She escapes before they found out she is an alien and steals the virus. She goes back to Enterprise and asked the crew for help. Phlox will develop an anti-virus, but he is not sure he will make one in time.
So Trip and T'Pol work to find a way to go back in the time-line, before Archer was taken prison. Nice TnT scenes and then they do go back in time, we pick up where we left, and it goes futher as the normal episode, Archer and T'pol destroy the medical facility, the reserach, the Rep. and take one with them. The end.
Well, this was a story line i made up in 5 minutes. And it shows!
panyasan wrote:This is fun! Let me see, Archer and T'Pol do go back to 2004. But instead of being onseen by the Rep. capture Archer and decide he is their guinea pig for their experiment with virus they want to use against Earth. While Archer is fighting for his life on his sick bed, T'Pol is confronted with two noisy police officers, who think she is the bad guy. She escapes before they found out she is an alien and steals the virus. She goes back to Enterprise and asked the crew for help. Phlox will develop an anti-virus, but he is not sure he will make one in time.
So Trip and T'Pol work to find a way to go back in the time-line, before Archer was taken prison. Nice TnT scenes and then they do go back in time, we pick up where we left, and it goes futher as the normal episode, Archer and T'pol destroy the medical facility, the reserach, the Rep. and take one with them. The end.
Well, this was a story line i made up in 5 minutes. And it shows!
Lady Rainbow wrote:A Carpenter Street rewrite in a minute and a half...
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Kevin Thomas Riley wrote:Lady Rainbow wrote:A Carpenter Street rewrite in a minute and a half...
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But a good one!
Kevin Thomas Riley wrote:Lady Rainbow wrote:A Carpenter Street rewrite in a minute and a half...
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Temporal mechanics gives me a headache...![]()
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But a good one!![]()
panyasan wrote:I never thought about Carpenter Street, but after this thread I came up with a couple of scenes. Like to give it a try, if you do not mind.
Escriba wrote:panyasan wrote:I never thought about Carpenter Street, but after this thread I came up with a couple of scenes. Like to give it a try, if you do not mind.
Yes, pleeease, do it, do it!
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