New Story by Drogna

[Dinah]

Wow! There is so much going on in this story that it requires two or three readings to take it all in. I think Trip is close to discovering what's happening on Coriolis. I'm not sure if that knowledge, however, will be a blessing or a curse.

I hope you don't kill off Jerry and his wife. They seem like good people -- a bit naive, perhaps, but nice.

Outstanding, as always.

[Drogna]

Chapter 6 of Songs in Red and Grey is now available in the usual place.

Chapter 6

I hope you like it.

[blacknblue]

Waaahooooo!!!!!!

Finally!

[blacknblue]

*sigh*

When is Trip going to learn to think things through? As soon as he heard the voices coming out of Andros's office, he should have returned to his quarters, reassembled that gun into a scanner, and gone to bed. When the medics came for him, he should have pretended to be there all along.

Well meaning idiot. The road to hell...etc.

[Reanok]

Oh man Trip is in so much Trouble and that he's got enemies everywhere he turns.It makes things even more perilous for him . I have to say that colonel Andros is a nasty despicable villian and I hope she gets her comeuppance. I'll be glad when Trip gets away from these awful black ops people.

[Dinah]

I really enjoyed Chapter 5. Your characterizations are outstanding, as usual. Just when I think that Major Sandrikov and Colonel Andros can't get any more ruthless, you prove me wrong. Are they sociopaths? They are just plain despicable. Please tell me that Archer's going to meet this pair. If he did, I think he'd modify his opinion of Colonel Darwin slightly. Darwin's a boy scout compared to this pair.

I hope Jerry's going to be OK. Poor Trip has enough to worry about without worrying about Jerry, too.

I hope the Klingons never find out how they're being manipulated. That could get ugly. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

[Entilzha]

Me thinks the Andorian plague is connected to the MACO base in some way.

[Reanok]

I definetly think they're invoved with the Andorian Plague and yes Andros & Sandrikov seems to be sociopaths their behavior sure seems like it. They have no respect for the people under their command or lying the people on that planet they want to start war with the klingons.They care less how many people are killed as long as their plans aren't interfered with Trip is in danger because he's starting to put the puzzle together.

[pookha]

or are the klingons behind it.

[Drogna]

I'm not giving anything away, but at least one of you is on the right track
Although no one's guessed completely what's going on... But, as the writer, I'd be disappointed if you had!

[Reanok]

I love a good Mystery story and seeing it unfold is part of the fun guessing who's really behind the plots who's planned this and how they stop the bad guys is the best part is seeing the goodguys figuring it out.

[Drogna]

Chapter 7 of Songs in Red and Grey is now up in the usual place!

Chapter 7

Really sorry for the long wait here, various family and work commitments kept me busy and then just to make life really interestng Mini-Drogna came down with chicken pox. The spots are mostly gone now so life has pretty much returned to normal. To make it up to you there should be another update in a couple of days - chapter 8 is in final beta at the moment.

[blacknblue]

The Vector?

So it is a cultured Bio-weapon huh? And they are testing it on the Andorians? It is about to hit the rotating blades big time.

Hurry up Hurry up hurry up hurry up hurry up!!!!!!

[pookha]

it is just getting so obvious and andros was so over the top evil with the threats i wonder if something else is going on.

any why the andorians.
a case could be made that without shran the earth still wouldnt exist.

for intstance the dilithium makes things different.
if the klingons do find out they will attack.
and right now earth isnt up to help defending them.
but with their own warp drive development they have a chance.

and i still wouldnt be suprised if the klingons were behind the illness with ultimate plans to use it on humans but getting rid of earths allies first.

in some kind of retaliation for the divergence virus.

drogna sorry to hear about mini drogna being ill.

[Reanok]

I'm sorry liitle Drogna is ill I hope he feels better soon. Andros is up to no good with the Vector wanting to attack Andoria I wonder why they want to cause trouble on Andoria. And How Trip is going to stop their plans with Archer's & T'Pol's and Malcolm's help. her threats to have them killed means she's angry Trip defied hwer orders.