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Re: May We Together Become Greater Than The Sum Of Us by WG

Postby Transwarp » Wed Jun 08, 2011 7:12 am

Grrr wrote:I know this probably isn't going to be helpful but, I say If it's good don't worry about how long it is.

What Grrr said!

Also, I must applaud your courage. I would never dream of publicly declaring an unposted chapter as 'good' before the fact. There have been too many times I have written a MASTERPIECE of sublime prose, only to find it has somehow morphed into mindless drivel overnight.

I can't explain how such a thing is possible; no one else has the password to my computer. Perhaps it is cosmic rays zapping my RAM?
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Re: May We Together Become Greater Than The Sum Of Us by WG

Postby WarpGirl » Wed Jun 08, 2011 1:27 pm

:oops: You must think I'm some sort of horrible bragger! The truth is I rarely call my work "good" especially my old-school notebook (the kind with paper in it) drafts. But for some reason, after I worked through the depression of my sis's miscarriage the words just seem to be working out really well. It does and will need a lot of polishing! With my spelling and grammar I pity the poor beta who has to clean it up. But still... All the feelings and themes I wanted for this chapter are working out really well. So I do think it's pretty "good." I was very proud of the posted version of chapter 5, but I honestly think this is going to be better. :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops:
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Re: May We Together Become Greater Than The Sum Of Us by WG

Postby Transwarp » Wed Jun 08, 2011 1:50 pm

WarpGirl wrote:All the feelings and themes I wanted for this chapter are working out really well.

It's a nice feeling, isn't it? I find it doesn't happen (for me) all that much, so I try to enjoy it when it does. Especially nice is when I can re-read something I wrote the next day, and think 'Yep, I nailed it!'

And *that's* why I write. (Oh, and also for the comments...)
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Re: May We Together Become Greater Than The Sum Of Us by WG

Postby WarpGirl » Wed Jun 08, 2011 1:52 pm

We're all review junkies! I panic whenever I don't see a name that has reviewed before. I mean if someone's gonna stop reviewing I wanna know why! Ooops. I gotta finish my reviews for eK!
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Re: May We Together Become Greater Than The Sum Of Us by WG

Postby Cogito » Wed Jun 08, 2011 3:45 pm

WarpGirl wrote:We're all review junkies! I panic whenever I don't see a name that has reviewed before. I mean if someone's gonna stop reviewing I wanna know why! Ooops. I gotta finish my reviews for eK!


That reminds me:

Is there a way for writers to be told when people have added comments for their stories?

Or should I say US writers? :D

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Re: May We Together Become Greater Than The Sum Of Us by WG

Postby WarpGirl » Wed Jun 08, 2011 3:48 pm

No there isn't! Unfortunately, I've always wished we could have an e-mail alert for comments. They have one at other sites I've written on. But yes it's US! writers now because you are a part of the family now! :happyjump: And you made out like a bandit too! :twisted:
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Re: May We Together Become Greater Than The Sum Of Us by WG

Postby WarpGirl » Fri Jun 10, 2011 3:41 pm

Okay I might not be as long as I originally feared. I remembered something very important, hand-written copies take up more space than typing. So maybe when I finish typing it won't be so long.
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Re: May We Together Become Greater Than The Sum Of Us by WG

Postby WarpGirl » Mon Jun 13, 2011 11:41 am

Okay folks I'm officially on a deadline. I usually love the sound they make as they rush by but now I need one. I have to get this thing done before July 4th weekend. After that I'm in NY for at least two weeks, and possibly Canada after that, if my bro-in-law gives sis permission to have me. So it's possibly a month not at home! So now it's crunch time. I don't want to leave Y'all hanging around so long.
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Re: May We Together Become Greater Than The Sum Of Us by WG

Postby WarpGirl » Mon Jun 13, 2011 8:30 pm

Would anyone kill me if I submitted the chapter in 2 parts? Please please tell me.
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Re: May We Together Become Greater Than The Sum Of Us by WG

Postby Cogito » Mon Jun 13, 2011 8:40 pm

Two chapters for the price of one? Of course we won't complain!

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Re: May We Together Become Greater Than The Sum Of Us by WG

Postby WarpGirl » Mon Jun 13, 2011 8:44 pm

I just didn't expect to run so long and I don't want people to get impatient. I should post something before I go away on my trip.
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And by people WG had herself in mind, but then the quote would have been ruined.
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Re: May We Together Become Greater Than The Sum Of Us by WG

Postby WarpGirl » Mon Jun 13, 2011 11:12 pm

Help please make it stop! All these words!!!!! :faint: :explode: And ya know what the really sick part is, I had writers block for so long. Now it's like a raging river with white rapids and I can't get off! :wtf:

You know what would be cool, in addition to emails alerting us to comments it would be so awesome if we could have multi-page chapters. That way for gigantic chapters it isn't all one Loooong chapter.
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Re: May We Together Become Greater Than The Sum Of Us by WG

Postby Cogito » Mon Jun 13, 2011 11:33 pm

WarpGirl wrote:Now it's like a raging river with white rapids and I can't get off!


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Re: May We Together Become Greater Than The Sum Of Us by WG

Postby WarpGirl » Mon Jun 13, 2011 11:36 pm

You sick, mean, evil, man!!!! :-p :-p :-p :-p :-p Don't you know white water kills! Oh wait you don't have that in Britian do you? Never mind! :roll: :lol:
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Re: May We Together Become Greater Than The Sum Of Us by WG

Postby Cogito » Tue Jun 14, 2011 12:08 am

WarpGirl wrote:You sick, mean, evil, man!!!! :-p :-p :-p :-p :-p Don't you know white water kills! Oh wait you don't have that in Britian do you? Never mind! :roll: :lol:


Well, maybe from your point of view it's a scary situation to be in. But look at it from our point of view. The story's coming. :D


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