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Re: Postcards from Deep Space One by Drogna

Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2007 9:45 pm
by evcake
Better now.
Wonderful - I especially like the descriptions of the bond. Hope to see more soon.

Re: Postcards from Deep Space One by Drogna

Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2007 9:46 pm
by Asso
evcake wrote:Better now.
Wonderful - I especially like the descriptions of the bond. Hope to see more soon.


EXACTLY! :D

Re: Postcards from Deep Space One by Drogna

Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2007 10:21 pm
by Drogna
Apologies if you've had trouble accessing the site, our ISP has been a bit up and down tonight. Hopefully normal service will resume shortly.

Thanks for the comments. I'm trying to get a bit more of T'Pol's side of things into this one. Vulcan bonds turn out to be really difficult to write, so it's nice to know that I'm at least some way to getting it.

Hopefully the next chapter should be up soon, it's currently in beta.

Re: Postcards from Deep Space One by Drogna

Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2007 10:41 pm
by evcake
Can't wait! It's really a superb story, Drogna.

Re: Postcards from Deep Space One by Drogna

Posted: Sat Nov 03, 2007 11:14 pm
by Drogna
Chapter three is up.
Postcards from Deep Space One

More mystery, more Trip and T'Pol. What more could you want? Well let me know and I'll see what I can do... :lol:

Re: Postcards from Deep Space One by Drogna

Posted: Mon Nov 05, 2007 2:14 am
by Complicated
I love it! 8) Keep the next chapters coming.... :D

Re: Postcards from Deep Space One by Drogna

Posted: Mon Nov 05, 2007 4:00 am
by Reanok
The suspense of sabotures keeps building this is getting really exciting. poor Trip has his hands full with all the damage and now the reactor almost exploding.I wonder what's happening to T'Pol and the bond she's sharing with Trip.She wanted to discuss her problems with Phlox.

Re: Postcards from Deep Space One by Drogna

Posted: Mon Nov 05, 2007 2:38 pm
by Entilzha
I think somebody is after the Bolians 8)

Re: Postcards from Deep Space One by Drogna

Posted: Mon Nov 05, 2007 7:39 pm
by Reanok
The Romulans perhaps they love to cause trouble. :lol:

Re: Postcards from Deep Space One by Drogna

Posted: Tue Nov 06, 2007 3:27 am
by Dinah
You have me completely stymied. I have no idea what's causing the problems at Deep Space One.

I liked the shower scene. I think you're doing a great job showing how they're using the bond and the impact it's having on their life.

I hope young Master Drogna cooperates and you can post the next chapter SOON. You're story's great, as always.

Re: Postcards from Deep Space One by Drogna

Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2007 7:42 pm
by Drogna
Happy Christmas everyone!

Chapter Four of Postcards from Deep Space One is now up on the website.
Chapter Four

Re: Postcards from Deep Space One by Drogna

Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2007 7:48 pm
by Asso
A Christmas present really appreciated! :D

Re: Postcards from Deep Space One by Drogna

Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2007 8:14 pm
by evcake
Can't read it 'til I get home, but just let me say: YAY!!!

Re: Postcards from Deep Space One by Drogna

Posted: Thu Dec 27, 2007 12:18 am
by dialee
Drogna:

Really really liked your new chapter. It had a little of everything:

1. Trip and T'Pol angst but Drogna style, emotional but also quickly common sensical in going to resolve it with Phlox's help to identify the cause of the angst and then getting on with life.

2. Malcolm's help with the cloaked ship. It did take the thinking process of a armoury or security specialist to look at it from the other way, that Trip's sensor modifications did in fact did show something which wasn't supposed to be there in the first place.

3. Patterson's clean-up of the sensor feeds.

I'm sure there was one or two other stuff but I can't remember them but these three stood out. Are you trying to tell us something? i.e. that it really might be personal, that someone is really trying to get Trip?

Re: Postcards from Deep Space One by Drogna

Posted: Thu Dec 27, 2007 1:51 am
by Complicated
Very good chapter....looking forward to the next one!