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Re: June '09 Word Prompt

Postby Dinah » Sun Jun 28, 2009 4:52 pm

That was absolutely lovely, anaM. Thank you.

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Re: June '09 Word Prompt

Postby anaM » Sun Jun 28, 2009 5:03 pm

Oh, well, I like Frank Sinatra, I like Trip, so Trip likes Frank Sinatra. It's only logical!
Thank you guys for liking it, it's a small thing but it's making me very happy to hear kind words from writers of your level :D

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Re: June '09 Word Prompt

Postby bluetiger » Sun Jun 28, 2009 5:32 pm

Wow, I really liked that. A perfect moment that said so much about their life together. It's all about spending your life with someone you love. Great job, anaM.
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Re: June '09 Word Prompt

Postby Alelou » Sun Jun 28, 2009 6:58 pm

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Re: June '09 Word Prompt

Postby Asso » Sun Jun 28, 2009 7:22 pm

anaM wrote:Oh, well, I like Frank Sinatra, I like Trip, so Trip likes Frank Sinatra. It's only logical!

An excellent syllogism. :lol:
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The Ears of the Elves, chapter Forty-four


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Re: June '09 Word Prompt

Postby justTripn » Sun Jun 28, 2009 7:24 pm

I accedentally put this post in the wrong thread:

I posted a story in the General Enterprise section about Malcolm's dysfunctional family. It started out as a "regret" challenge. Didn't actually end up that way, but

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Re: June '09 Word Prompt

Postby evcake » Sun Jul 12, 2009 3:48 am

Well done, anaM :D

I know I'm late, but:

Overheard: In the Garden, Again

How good it is to return home after an absence. There is no comfort like that of retuning to one’s own place.
I see that all is well in my garden. My neighbors have tended it well. I look forward to meditating again on my accustomed bench. If only the shrubs outside the wall were not rustling and waving about…
The familiar golden head appears and bright blue eyes regard me.
“Na’shaya, tela’at. It is agreeable to thee again.”
“It is agreeable to see thee as well, behsu-kan. The wall is very high at this point, child. How have you reached the top?”
“I am standing on Taluhk, sir.”
“Truly she is a most long-suffering companion. May I assist you?”
“Thank you, tela’at”
Solemn as a Vulcan child, but ten times as dirty any I have ever seen.
”No thanks are necessary, child. It is the duty of elders to help the young. Thanks are illogical, as I told you.”
“Mother said that too when I wanted to come to thank you for helping me when Taluhk ran away.”
“Your mother speaks as a proper Vulcan.”
“But Daddy is human, and he said it was part of my human heritage. But when I came, you were gone. Where did you go, tela’at?”
“And curiosity is a part of your human heritage as well, child?”
“Yes, sir.”
“Very well, I travelled to a gathering of my clan. We gathered to acknowledge the life of one of our number who has died. This is how Vulcans mourn.”
“Oh. I’m sorry, sir.”
“Your sentiments are appreciated, child. Our loss is…regrettable.”
“I hope you like how I tended your garden – Daddy said I could take care of it for you.”
“You alone undertook this task?”
“Yes. Mother taught me which ones to water, and what the weeds look like.”
I sense that in years to come, this child will often render me speechless. On this occasion, however:
“Thank you, behsu-kan.”

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Re: June '09 Word Prompt

Postby bluetiger » Sun Jul 12, 2009 5:30 pm

evcake, thank you for more of the next door neighbor saga. I also think that in the years to come much will be learned by the neighbor from this half human child. Please keep them coming.
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Re: June '09 Word Prompt

Postby anaM » Sun Jul 12, 2009 5:54 pm

Really lovely, Evcake! And, yes, there is a July prompt and I hope you'll have something for us there!

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Re: June '09 Word Prompt

Postby Asso » Sun Jul 12, 2009 7:09 pm

Delicious, Evcake. :D
Well yes. I continue to write. And on Fanfiction.Net, for those who want, it is possible to cast a glance at my latest efforts. We arrived to
The Ears of the Elves, chapter Forty-four


And here is the beginning of the whole story.
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But, I must say, you could also find something else on Fanfiction.net written by me. If you want.

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Re: June '09 Word Prompt

Postby Aquarius » Tue Jul 14, 2009 3:37 am

OMG, I can't believe I totally missed responding to this thread--probably because I haven't finished my fic for it, either! :oops: My bad.

Everyone did a fabulous job!

Escriba, I love how you brought yours to life with pictures! I think that is the most unique execution I've seen of the prompts yet! I loved it.

evcake--what can I say? I love that you've given us another encounter with the neighbor! Please keep these coming. There most definitely is a July prompt, and I'd love to hear from the neighbor again.

Still working on mine, hope others are, too. 8)
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Re: June '09 Word Prompt

Postby enterprikayak » Tue Jul 14, 2009 4:55 am

Okay, eScriba's anime cartoons are freakishly lifelike.

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Re: June '09 Word Prompt

Postby Elessar » Tue Jul 14, 2009 6:30 am

Escriba wrote:Well, I tried to do a comic for this entry, but it has become longer than what I thought. I only have five pages done and I don't promise I'm going to finish it (because it's more work than what I thought.) But it was a pity to just waste them, so here they are.

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I want adoration. If you can't say "Ohhh... shiny," then say nothing :-P


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