Kirk Vs Picard on Fanlib.com

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Re: Kirk Vs Picard on Fanlib.com

Postby TPoptarts » Tue Jul 03, 2007 5:53 am

Whoa. Great pick. That scene really is something. Thanks Mr. Green
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Re: Kirk Vs Picard on Fanlib.com

Postby Distracted » Wed Jul 04, 2007 11:24 pm

Well, it didn't make the final five. Neither did either of mine. As a matter of fact, when I was trying to rank the ones that did make it, I found myself in the unenviable position of choosing the least of five evils. All five had spelling or format issues. One actually had Riker at the wheel of the truck that ran down Edith Keeler, and another one had Guinan as captain of a ship with Wesley as her first officer. Rolling Eyes

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Re: Kirk Vs Picard on Fanlib.com

Postby TPoptarts » Thu Jul 05, 2007 12:45 am

What the FRELL???? Confused Confused Confused Confused Confused Confused Confused

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Re: Kirk Vs Picard on Fanlib.com

Postby TPoptarts » Thu Jul 05, 2007 9:00 pm

Oh. Dude. I think I've just read like the worst scene ever. Confused Confused Confused Confused I don't think there was like one word in there that's actually in the dictionary. Confused And there's like 8 different alternate spellings for "Guardian" and neither of them is correct. Confused Confused Confused Confused Confused Confused
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Re: Kirk Vs Picard on Fanlib.com

Postby CoffeeCat » Thu Jul 05, 2007 9:50 pm

LOL - I found this one fic on fanlib titled "The Borg Envasion"

I was like WTF? and I had to comment that it looks pretty silly that he or she was using a word in the title that wasn't even in the dictionary. Dude - it's "Invasion" - ain't nothing like using a spell checker, right?
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Re: Kirk Vs Picard on Fanlib.com

Postby Rigil Kent » Thu Jul 05, 2007 9:54 pm

Damn those Borg. Now they're fraking with our alphabet too.
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Postby TSara » Thu Jul 05, 2007 10:15 pm

Rigil Kent wrote:Damn those Borg. Now they're fraking with our alphabet too.



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Re: Kirk Vs Picard on Fanlib.com

Postby TPoptarts » Sat Jul 07, 2007 1:02 am

Confused Just read the winning round 2 entry like for the first time. Confused Distracted I really liked yours and the one you recommended like way better. Confused Confused Confused Well that one was like okay, thought it was kinda stale though until the end. Confused

Grumble grumble:
"There are a lot that can go wrong" etc or whatever Confused okay fine so I'm not like a beta reader or something but I'm dyslexic and stuff like that like totally disrupts the already slow flow of words to my tiny little brain. Confused
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Re: Kirk Vs Picard on Fanlib.com

Postby Distracted » Sat Jul 07, 2007 2:02 am

I'm all out of ideas to continue this one...and there's already a round 3 entry up! What do these people do? Write one for each finalist during the voting process and then post the one that follows the winner a minute after the round opens? Hmmm. Wish I'dve thought of that.

Here's a link to the Round 2 winner, just in case anyone's interested:

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Re: Kirk Vs Picard on Fanlib.com

Postby TPoptarts » Sat Jul 07, 2007 2:08 am

Distracted wrote:I'm all out of ideas to continue this one...

Well you could always make them sing and dance. It's not gonna win you anything but it's fun! Mr. Green
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Re: Kirk Vs Picard on Fanlib.com

Postby Distracted » Sat Jul 07, 2007 10:33 pm

My round 3 entry's up. I know I've used the title before, but it's appropriate. Tell me what you think.

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Re: Kirk Vs Picard on Fanlib.com

Postby Rigil Kent » Sun Jul 08, 2007 4:09 am

Distracted wrote:My round 3 entry's up. I know I've used the title before, but it's appropriate. Tell me what you think.

The Needs of the Many

I can't really get into it. That's not your fault, mind you, but rather the constraints of what you had to work with. I'd have much rather read the resolution to the Borged out Guardian. What they gave you to work with this time is, frankly, pedestrian and really boring.

It's well written though.
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Re: Kirk Vs Picard on Fanlib.com

Postby TPoptarts » Sun Jul 08, 2007 4:25 am

Cool!! Mr. Green See you're not out of ideas yet. Very Happy Though I agree with Rigil that I'd prefer your Borgified Guardian storyline or the other entry you recommended, I think they're like way more engaging and would make a better ground to build a scene #3 on, but oh well you got what you got, and I think you did a great job and like way elevated it from its scene #2 staleness. Very Happy

I still wish I could make the Borg sing and dance though. Grumble grumble. Sad
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Re: Kirk Vs Picard on Fanlib.com

Postby Rigil Kent » Sun Jul 08, 2007 4:30 am

Do it anyway, T. As indicated by the frankly stale "winners", they really need someone like you to shake things up. Cool
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Re: Kirk Vs Picard on Fanlib.com

Postby TPoptarts » Sun Jul 08, 2007 6:24 am

Rigil Kent wrote:Do it anyway, T. As indicated by the frankly stale "winners", they really need someone like you to shake things up. Cool

Like their mechanic little Borg booties? Twisted Evil (poor Rigil's gonna get an aneurism Confused )

Oh. Sudden brainfart. Confused Confused I'm starting to get like images of the Borg vs. Species 8472 as a Broadway stage production. Confused Confused Confused Confused
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