Liberty Two-Four (what do you think)

[Buurman]

So ... as of now I have sent in part 5. Things should start to clear up. Since there are some people who've expressed difficulty with keeping up with the ... unrevealing ... way I wrote expecially the first four or so instalments I wanted to ask you to express your opinion. There's more room to do just that in a place here instead of in a comment box.

While I agree that there is a bit of confusion in the beginning I wrote it that way because I liked the puzzle and the ... alternative way of writing. It's something different. It adds suspension. But I also think that it'll read better once you can read all instalments in one swoop.

But then again, I read it as a writer who is omniscient (with regard to his fic, at least). You might feel different.

For those who are wondering with regard to my previous disappearance: Yes, Liberty Two-Four will be finished. In fact, it is already finished. In fact, I'm am working on its successor.

But I'd like to hear everybody's opinion on everything. What do you like, what don't you like, what would you like to see happening, what do you think will happen, and such. I would like to know where it sits in your minds, so to speak ^^

Thanks in advance!

[Asso]

I like it, but I have to read more. It's heavy (in a good mood) and intense. I prefer to have more chapters, before I say something else. But one fact is sure: it drags your attention.

[panyasan]

Hi Buurman, I liked your chapters, there are nice and short (in contrast to my fic ) and I don't mind being at bit in the dark. I mean, when some one is kipnapped the situation can be very confusing.