New Story by Drogna

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Re: New Story by Drogna

Postby enterprikayak » Sat Oct 06, 2007 3:41 pm

nothing crustier than the chicken pox... glad he's over it.
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Re: New Story by Drogna

Postby pookha » Sat Oct 06, 2007 4:28 pm

if andros is as evil as she appears then trip is in a lot of trouble as soon as she dosnt need him.
i dont think he sees the consequences that she openly threatened to kill archer in front of him.
you dont openly threaten to kill someone like that without knowing there could be consequences if word of it got out.

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Re: New Story by Drogna

Postby Drogna » Sun Oct 07, 2007 9:19 pm

Chapter 8 is up:

Chapter 8

Hopefully that will put the cat amongst the pigeons. :twisted:

Mini-Drogna thanks everyone for their get well wishes and would like me to pass on that he is feeling much better now. He is back to terrorising the cats and grabbing things that he shouldn't with avengeance. :D
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Re: New Story by Drogna

Postby Dinah » Sun Oct 07, 2007 9:44 pm

I haven't had a chance to do more than scan these two new chapters, but I just wanted you to know that I REALLY like what I've read so far. Just a few observations: I think Trip may be in way over his head this time; Andros makes the Borg Queen look like Mother Theresa; and will Archer never learn -- don't leave T'Pol behind.

I'm glad that young master Drogna has recovered. Chicken pox is no fun, especially when the patient is so little.

I'll comment more when I have the time to give these two chapters the attention they deserve. Thanks for the updates. Your stories are always the BEST.

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Re: New Story by Drogna

Postby Reanok » Mon Oct 08, 2007 1:07 am

8) Wow! This chapter was full of great character moments with Archer, Shran and Darwin we start to see Andros and the Vector has ties to what happened with epidemic on Andoria. I'm glad to see Archer trying to help Shran it's nice to see the friendship between them and trying to help Shran with his loss & anger. I laughed out loud about Darwin & Shran talking about lousy food. :lol: And Shran's comments that Humans are very strange indeed, I hope we'll see what T'Pol's up to with Archer being gone . This getting really exciting I look forward to the next chapter.

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Re: New Story by Drogna

Postby pookha » Mon Oct 08, 2007 6:56 am

“I know we are, when we want to be,” admitted Shran, “but for all we know the Telispa was wherever it was by mistake

hmm was a little light shed in the midst of the storm.
the andorians accidentally got caught up in something intended for someone else.

drogna have you ever heard the fan theory that the andorians could have been bio engineered.

what is say the preservers had tried to create a warrior guardian race.

and the computer got smarter hey..
wonder were tpol is
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Re: New Story by Drogna

Postby blacknblue » Mon Oct 08, 2007 12:37 pm

I wonder what Andros will think when she discovers what happens when she hurts a Vulcan's bondmate?
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Re: New Story by Drogna

Postby Entilzha » Wed Oct 10, 2007 7:41 pm

T'Pol wiping the floor with her :D
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Re: New Story by Drogna

Postby Reanok » Sat Oct 13, 2007 12:18 am

T'Pol will teach Andros what happens to someone who hurts Trip.

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Re: New Story by Drogna

Postby Asso » Sat Oct 13, 2007 12:24 am

Reanok wrote:T'Pol will teach Andros what happens to someone who hurts Trip.


Poor Andros!
:shock: :shock: :shock:
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Re: New Story by Drogna

Postby Drogna » Sun Nov 11, 2007 10:48 pm

Chapter nine of Songs in Red and Grey is up at the usual place:
Chapter Nine

More Shran, Archer and Darwin - I'll get back to Trip next time.
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Re: New Story by Drogna

Postby Reanok » Mon Nov 12, 2007 2:14 am

:) Drogna that was a very exciting chapter can't wait to see what happens next.

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Re: New Story by Drogna

Postby Dinah » Tue Nov 13, 2007 1:43 am

Excellent chapter! Shran, Archer and Darwin as commandos was great. I loved the explosives that couldn't be detected by the Andorians. The description of Vela Kari base was great. And you even managed to work in Talas' mother. Shran really dodged a bullet there; she could have been his mother-in-law.

You always do such a beautiful job of building relationships between people. You've done it here again with Shran, his brother, and Lt. Talerez. Slowly but surely, you're also building a interesting relationship between Archer and Darwin. I can't wait to see where you take all this. Marvelous as always!

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Re: New Story by Drogna

Postby Drogna » Thu Dec 20, 2007 10:32 pm

Chapter 10 has now been added to Songs in Red and Grey: Chapter Ten

I bet you'd all forgotten that I existed.
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Re: New Story by Drogna

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