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Re: My Mixed Bag O'Drabbles

Postby Hummingbird2 » Fri Jul 13, 2012 1:15 pm

Thank you, Asso! :hug:

Part two:

Mesmerized
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T'Pol awoke to the sounds of Sickbay. Apparently, giving birth had been more taxing than she realized.

"Hey," Trip said softly. He looked tired, yet happy. "Need anything?"

"I am thirsty," she replied.

When Trip went to get her some water, T'Pol noticed Jon sitting beside the Bassinet, staring at Lorian as if mesmerized.

She recalled him coming in earlier, wearing the Grandpa t-shirt Trip had given him as a gag gift. She had dozed off shortly after that.

When Trip returned, she asked, "how long has he been sitting there?"

Trip shrugged, then handed her a glass of water. "About an hour." He leaned over, and said in a conspiratorial whisper, "I think he's in shock."

T'Pol's only response was a quirk of her eyebrow.
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Re: My Mixed Bag O'Drabbles

Postby Asso » Fri Jul 13, 2012 8:25 pm

You know what? This is really nice, but there is one thing, something small but great, that really grabs. A few words spoken by T'Pol: "I am thirsty".
I do not know, I can not explain it, but even in their appearing "nothing", they are able to say a mountain of things.
About T'Pol, about Trip. About both them.
And they're all beautiful things.
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Re: My Mixed Bag O'Drabbles

Postby panyasan » Sat Jul 14, 2012 9:09 am

Hummingbird2 wrote:Thank you, Asso! :hug:

Part two:

Mesmerized
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T'Pol awoke to the sounds of Sickbay. Apparently, giving birth had been more taxing than she realized.

"Hey," Trip said softly. He looked tired, yet happy. "Need anything?"

"I am thirsty," she replied.

When Trip went to get her some water, T'Pol noticed Jon sitting beside the Bassinet, staring at Lorian as if mesmerized.

She recalled him coming in earlier, wearing the Grandpa t-shirt Trip had given him as a gag gift. She had dozed off shortly after that.

When Trip returned, she asked, "how long has he been sitting there?"

Trip shrugged, then handed her a glass of water. "About an hour." He leaned over, and said in a conspiratorial whisper, "I think he's in shock."

T'Pol's only response was a quirk of her eyebrow.


Such a nice, sweet (and funny) scene. You got talent, Hummingbird!
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Re: My Mixed Bag O'Drabbles

Postby Hummingbird2 » Sat Jul 14, 2012 1:05 pm

Thank you very much, Asso and Panyasan! :D That's really kind of both of you to say.
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Re: My Mixed Bag O'Drabbles

Postby Hummingbird2 » Tue Jul 17, 2012 2:08 pm

Part three: Two weeks later...

Getting Up
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Written for The Delphic Expanse November '11 word prompt 'Cave'.

"Lorian is awake."

"I can hear that."

"I will attend to him."

"Hold on, isn't it my turn?"

"You have to get up early."

"So? You don't have to do everything."

"I'm on the outside of the bed. Therefore, it is logical for me to go."

"Oh, Lord love a Duck, T'Pol!"

"I fail to see-"

"Never mind. Just let me get up, okay?"

"Very well."

"Really?"

"Is that a problem?"

"Well, no, it's just that...you caved awfully fast."

"Perhaps I am simply too tired to argue."

"Huh. Wait a minute, he's not crying anymore."

"I sense that he's confused."

"Can't say I blame him."

"..."

"Um, why don't we both go check on him?"
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Re: My Mixed Bag O'Drabbles

Postby Alelou » Tue Jul 17, 2012 4:25 pm

:) Cute!
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Re: My Mixed Bag O'Drabbles

Postby Weeble » Tue Jul 17, 2012 9:08 pm

Hopefully Lorian wan't permanently damaged...... :rotflmao:
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Re: My Mixed Bag O'Drabbles

Postby Distracted » Wed Jul 18, 2012 1:22 am

Oh, Lord love a duck, Weeble! :lol:
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Re: My Mixed Bag O'Drabbles

Postby Hummingbird2 » Wed Jul 18, 2012 1:11 pm

Weeble wrote:Hopefully Lorian wan't permanently damaged...... :rotflmao:


Nah, he's definitely his father's son. ;-) In other words, he'll get used to it! :lol:

Distracted wrote:Oh, Lord love a duck, Weeble! :lol:


Good one! :thumbsup: Thank you all. :)
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Re: My Mixed Bag O'Drabbles

Postby Hummingbird2 » Fri Jul 20, 2012 6:46 pm

Sunday
Summary: An afternoon of discovery.
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“This is the Helix Nebula. They call this kind Planetary Nebulae, even though it’s not a Planet.”

Carefully balancing the Astronomy book on his lap, Archer turned the page to one of his favorite pictures.

"And this…”He announced to his companion. “Is the Arachnid Nebula. We actually got to see this one up close. Of course, that was before your time.”

Lorian squealed, and reached out to pat the picture.

“My thoughts, exactly,” Archer said, with a wry smile.

He couldn’t help but think that, just a few years ago, he had been primarily concerned with fulfilling his father’s dream, exploring space, and making history with every light year.

Right now, he was content to spend a lazy Sunday afternoon with his five month old Grandson.

It didn’t get much better than that.
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Re: My Mixed Bag O'Drabbles

Postby Distracted » Sat Jul 21, 2012 12:55 am

Awwww....
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Re: My Mixed Bag O'Drabbles

Postby Hummingbird2 » Sun Jul 22, 2012 1:26 pm

Thank you, Distracted! :D

Nursery Rhymes
Summary: Fun with Trip and T'Pol.
Rated G. Dialogue only.

“Phlox be nimble, Phlox be quick, Phlox jumped over a candlestick.”

“I do not believe that is the actual rhyme.”

“Come on, he won’t know the difference. “

“Very well, please continue.”

“Thank you. Little Jonny Archer sat in a—what rhymes with ‘Archer’?”

“Perhaps if you used the correct verses, it wouldn’t be so difficult.”

“Where’s the fun in that?”

“I was trying to be helpful.”

“Hoshi and Malcolm sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G…”

“That was highly inappropriate.”

“Sorry, couldn’t resist. Okay, how about…Travis ran all through the town, in his nightgown.”

“Ensign Mayweather has a nightgown?”

“Very funny, T’Pol.”
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Re: My Mixed Bag O'Drabbles

Postby Distracted » Mon Jul 23, 2012 1:37 am

:lol:
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Re: My Mixed Bag O'Drabbles

Postby Weeble » Mon Jul 23, 2012 2:24 pm

:tears: :tears: "Phlox jumped over a candlestick" chased by a highly po'ed pyrithian bat no doubt :tears: :tears:
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Re: My Mixed Bag O'Drabbles

Postby Asso » Mon Jul 23, 2012 2:30 pm

Hummingbird2 wrote:Nursery Rhymes
Summary: Fun with Trip and T'Pol.
Rated G. Dialogue only.

“Phlox be nimble, Phlox be quick, Phlox jumped over a candlestick.”

“I do not believe that is the actual rhyme.”

“Come on, he won’t know the difference. “

“Very well, please continue.”

“Thank you. Little Jonny Archer sat in a—what rhymes with ‘Archer’?”

“Perhaps if you used the correct verses, it wouldn’t be so difficult.”

“Where’s the fun in that?”

“I was trying to be helpful.”

“Hoshi and Malcolm sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G…”

“That was highly inappropriate.”

“Sorry, couldn’t resist. Okay, how about…Travis ran all through the town, in his nightgown.”

“Ensign Mayweather has a nightgown?”

“Very funny, T’Pol.”

:D
Well yes. I continue to write. And on Fanfiction.Net, for those who want, it is possible to cast a glance at my latest efforts. We arrived to
The Ears of the Elves, chapter Forty-four


And here is the beginning of the whole story.
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But, I must say, you could also find something else on Fanfiction.net written by me. If you want.


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