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Who is narrator

Support she sees
To help her to be free
To be together

SB

EK, right on the first Drabble it is T'Pol

SB

enterprikayak wrote:Haikus of 5 syllables/ 7 syllables/ 5 syllables!

Perhaps I'm not counting properly, but it doesn't look to me as if those last two from SB are following the '5, 7, 5' rule.

Slap my wrist hard. Sorry, early morning and not awake. Knew I owed two, so.....

Your guess?

SB

Well, I reckon the first one is T'Pol, but EK already beat me to that.

As for the second one, no idea. I guess it's about T'Pol, and the narrator realises that (presumably) T'Pol has found some support, but who/what that support is and who the narrator is I'm afraid I can't fathom.

One that easy? You are joking, of course.

I will rewrite it

My support she sees
for me to help her to be free
for us to be together

SB

Still too vague for me. And it's supposed to be 5-7-5 syllables, not words.

But if I were to guess, I'd say... Princess Fishstick maybe? Wasn't she trapped in something and Trip freed her? I'm stumped.

It would be out of character for you to pick these two to write about, but I guess you could be writing about Trip helping T'Pol escape from the coldly logical life that her culture had planned for her, for a life with him instead.

Cogito, right you are. It is Trip. thought that a T'Pol and Trip Kaikuu would be fun.

SB