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Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU
Posted: Fri Mar 25, 2011 3:49 pm
by Silverbullet
Dis, you are right it is too abstract and vague. I will try another later on.Idnore this will edit it out.
Sb
Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU
Posted: Mon Mar 28, 2011 1:18 am
by Distracted
*bump*
SB seems to have run out of ideas. I will step in to restart the game.
Command burdens me,
The expanse of duty calls,
And I am friendless
Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU
Posted: Mon Mar 28, 2011 1:24 am
by Silverbullet
Thanks, Dis. I have spent the day sarchingfor a users manual. It was not where I thought I had left it. Also a friend called and we talked for three hours. Had not spoken for a year. In addition I was correcting about a thousand mispellings in a story. Spell checker didn't get them all.
My guess: Archer
SB
Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU
Posted: Mon Mar 28, 2011 1:27 am
by Silverbullet
My Haidu:
So like her flower
The two of them in a bower
She blooms in her lover
Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU
Posted: Tue Mar 29, 2011 1:24 am
by Distracted
You're right about Archer, of course. I'm not sure about all the flower imagery in yours, though. Doesn't sound much like T'Pol, even though I know she and Trip are the couple you like to write about. I can't honestly think of any woman aboard who's got anything to do with flowers and has a lover.
Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU
Posted: Tue Mar 29, 2011 2:52 pm
by Cogito
Wasn't Liz a botanist? Not sure I associate her with any flower in particular so I'm not sure what 'her flower' means. Did she marry Phlox in E2?
Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU
Posted: Tue Mar 29, 2011 4:26 pm
by Silverbullet
Flower was imagry. He took her flower (virgiity) in their lovers Bower. So she blossoms as a woman in her lover.
Enough of a hint.
Sb
Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU
Posted: Tue Mar 29, 2011 4:39 pm
by Cogito
I'm not sure I really get that, but from the clue it surely has to be TnT.
Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU
Posted: Tue Mar 29, 2011 5:32 pm
by Silverbullet
Cogito, yes, it is TnT more specifaclly T'Pol. You get to compose a Haiku too.
SB
Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU
Posted: Tue Mar 29, 2011 7:25 pm
by Cogito
It doesn't feel very Haiku-ey to me, but it has the right number of syllables:
I wish I was free.
Free to live, to love, to choose.
What would that be like?
Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU
Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2011 12:21 am
by Silverbullet
Cogito, the Cogenitor.
SB
Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU
Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2011 12:35 am
by Cogito
Yes, well done.
Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU
Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2011 3:56 am
by Silverbullet
I was correct with Archer and now Cogenitor. so I owe a Haiku or two
SB
Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU
Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2011 3:25 pm
by Silverbullet
Who is the narrator
Alone am I, adrift
Where is it now I can call home
Where he is,it is
SB
Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU
Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2011 3:29 pm
by enterprikayak
T'Pol?