GUESS WHO HAIKU

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Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU

Postby Silverbullet » Fri Mar 25, 2011 3:49 pm

Dis, you are right it is too abstract and vague. I will try another later on.Idnore this will edit it out.

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Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU

Postby Distracted » Mon Mar 28, 2011 1:18 am

*bump*

SB seems to have run out of ideas. I will step in to restart the game.

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Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU

Postby Silverbullet » Mon Mar 28, 2011 1:24 am

Thanks, Dis. I have spent the day sarchingfor a users manual. It was not where I thought I had left it. Also a friend called and we talked for three hours. Had not spoken for a year. In addition I was correcting about a thousand mispellings in a story. Spell checker didn't get them all.

My guess: Archer

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Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU

Postby Silverbullet » Mon Mar 28, 2011 1:27 am

My Haidu:

So like her flower
The two of them in a bower
She blooms in her lover
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Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU

Postby Distracted » Tue Mar 29, 2011 1:24 am

You're right about Archer, of course. I'm not sure about all the flower imagery in yours, though. Doesn't sound much like T'Pol, even though I know she and Trip are the couple you like to write about. I can't honestly think of any woman aboard who's got anything to do with flowers and has a lover.
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Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU

Postby Cogito » Tue Mar 29, 2011 2:52 pm

Wasn't Liz a botanist? Not sure I associate her with any flower in particular so I'm not sure what 'her flower' means. Did she marry Phlox in E2?

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Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU

Postby Silverbullet » Tue Mar 29, 2011 4:26 pm

Flower was imagry. He took her flower (virgiity) in their lovers Bower. So she blossoms as a woman in her lover.

Enough of a hint.

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Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU

Postby Cogito » Tue Mar 29, 2011 4:39 pm

I'm not sure I really get that, but from the clue it surely has to be TnT.

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Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU

Postby Silverbullet » Tue Mar 29, 2011 5:32 pm

Cogito, yes, it is TnT more specifaclly T'Pol. You get to compose a Haiku too.

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Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU

Postby Cogito » Tue Mar 29, 2011 7:25 pm

It doesn't feel very Haiku-ey to me, but it has the right number of syllables:

I wish I was free.
Free to live, to love, to choose.
What would that be like?

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Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU

Postby Silverbullet » Wed Mar 30, 2011 12:21 am

Cogito, the Cogenitor.

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Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU

Postby Cogito » Wed Mar 30, 2011 12:35 am

Yes, well done.

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Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU

Postby Silverbullet » Wed Mar 30, 2011 3:56 am

I was correct with Archer and now Cogenitor. so I owe a Haiku or two

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Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU

Postby Silverbullet » Thu Mar 31, 2011 3:25 pm

Who is the narrator

Alone am I, adrift
Where is it now I can call home
Where he is,it is

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Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU

Postby enterprikayak » Thu Mar 31, 2011 3:29 pm

T'Pol?
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