GUESS WHO HAIKU

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Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU

Postby Silverbullet » Thu Mar 31, 2011 3:30 pm

Who is narrator

Support she sees
To help her to be free
To be together

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Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU

Postby Silverbullet » Thu Mar 31, 2011 3:31 pm

EK, right on the first Drabble it is T'Pol

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Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU

Postby Cogito » Thu Mar 31, 2011 5:22 pm

enterprikayak wrote:Haikus of 5 syllables/ 7 syllables/ 5 syllables!


Perhaps I'm not counting properly, but it doesn't look to me as if those last two from SB are following the '5, 7, 5' rule. :cry:

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Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU

Postby Silverbullet » Thu Mar 31, 2011 8:00 pm

Slap my wrist hard. Sorry, early morning and not awake. Knew I owed two, so.....

Your guess?

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Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU

Postby Cogito » Thu Mar 31, 2011 8:18 pm

Well, I reckon the first one is T'Pol, but EK already beat me to that.

As for the second one, no idea. I guess it's about T'Pol, and the narrator realises that (presumably) T'Pol has found some support, but who/what that support is and who the narrator is I'm afraid I can't fathom.

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Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU

Postby Silverbullet » Thu Mar 31, 2011 8:39 pm

One that easy? You are joking, of course.

I will rewrite it

My support she sees
for me to help her to be free
for us to be together

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Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU

Postby Distracted » Thu Mar 31, 2011 10:24 pm

Still too vague for me. And it's supposed to be 5-7-5 syllables, not words.

But if I were to guess, I'd say... Princess Fishstick maybe? Wasn't she trapped in something and Trip freed her? I'm stumped.
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Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU

Postby Cogito » Thu Mar 31, 2011 10:40 pm

It would be out of character for you to pick these two to write about, but I guess you could be writing about Trip helping T'Pol escape from the coldly logical life that her culture had planned for her, for a life with him instead.

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Re: GUESS WHO HAIKU

Postby Silverbullet » Thu Mar 31, 2011 11:01 pm

Cogito, right you are. It is Trip. thought that a T'Pol and Trip Kaikuu would be fun.

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