"Guess Who" Drabble Challenge

[panyasan]

Don't worry. My last one doesn't count. That's why I said: one more drabble coming up.

[panyasan]

Sorry for the double post. I wrote another drabble, because WG didn't like the one I wrote for her.

From the best episode ever.

She had observed her daughter from the day she was born. Now her lost daughter had returned to her. She saw how her daughters eyes softened when she looked at this alien. How her voice became strong and confident as she defended her relationship with him. She saw the way her daughters body relaxed in his presence. How her daughter warmed herself to him. She cared about this blond stranger. More, her affection was deep as the waters in his world. But it was wrong. His species meant chaos. It wasn't the Vulcan way. So she had to stop it.

[Brandyjane]

That's good, panyasan! I'm not going to say who it is, though, since I really will not have time to get back online for the rest of the weekend. (Well, not if I do all the work I'm supposed to do.) I'll just say that I like the insight you give us into the character and her reasons for doing what she did. You make her both sympathetic and absolutely wrong at the same time.

WarpGirl, I adored your Daniel's drabble. I am in complete agreement with you about him. While I didn't like the TCW stuff, I did really like Daniels.

[Silverbullet]

Panysanne, is it T'Les? Sounds like her.

SB

[Brandyjane]

I think you've just committed yourself to the next drabble in this thread, SB!

[panyasan]

Yes, it's T'Les. It made me think of a story with T'Pol, Trip, Koss and her, from their POV's. So who knows?

Any way, it's your turn, Silverbullet. I can't wait to see what you come with.

[Distracted]

Very nice, panyasan!

If you need a beta, SB, I'm available. That way I get to see it first.

[WarpGirl]

Sorry for the double post. I wrote another drabble, because WG didn't like the one I wrote for her.

Hey I never said that! What a horrid thought, I like everything you write! Great Job on T'Les. It is so hard being a mom...

[panyasan]

I like everything you write

Now you make me blush. Thanks for the compliment.

[WarpGirl]

Hey SB get cracking!

[Silverbullet]

Here is unedited Drabble. Only 99 words.

It’s Micro-singularities.”

You on that again. They don’t exist.”

“They are responsible for the holes, here, here and here.”

“Nonsense. That was meteorites, no micro black Holes.

They have been proven. They do exist and they were responsible for those holes.”

If you say so but I still say they don’t exist.

You can see the evidence yourself. You cannot deny it.”

I give up. You are right. Can we move on to the important stuff.

“I believe it was the micro singularities that caused their problem.”

You would blameMicro singularities for the common cold.”

That is not true.”


SB

[WarpGirl]

Hey SB all you had to do is add the name of one of the characters in one of the lines of dialouge. Then you would have had 100 words, and still left a "guess who." Now I am not going to say who I think the characters are, I don't want to be next, and I have a Porthos drabble to write later. So all I will say is welcome to the club!

[enterprikayak]

To get another word, simply add another "here" to "“They are responsible for the holes, here, here and here.”"


"“They are responsible for the holes here, here, here and here.”"

Too much?

Good drabble.

[Cogito]

In only a few words you've shown them happily bickering with each other and captured both personalities perfectly. I daren't say who I think they are though, because my attempts to write a drabble of my own have all been dismal failures.

[WarpGirl]

NO IT WAS NOT Cogito! Write write!