Elessar's Numero Uno Drabble Fic

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Re: Elessar's Numero Uno Drabble Fic

Postby Distracted » Mon Jan 24, 2011 1:27 am

Definitely an AU of the MU. :wtf:

I keep thinking...what if a newbie checks out this thread and wonders what strange alien dialect we're speaking? ;-)
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Re: Elessar's Numero Uno Drabble Fic

Postby WarpGirl » Mon Jan 24, 2011 1:31 am

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And by people WG had herself in mind, but then the quote would have been ruined.
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Re: Elessar's Numero Uno Drabble Fic

Postby justTripn » Mon Jan 24, 2011 1:11 pm

Silverbullet, I'm going to call that MU. Otherwise I'm going to have to strongly disagree with your characterization.
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Re: Elessar's Numero Uno Drabble Fic

Postby Cogito » Mon Jan 24, 2011 3:03 pm

Distracted wrote:I keep thinking...what if a newbie checks out this thread and wonders what strange alien dialect we're speaking? ;-)


I am that newbie! WarpGirls response on that valentine thread left me absolutely baffled - as far as I can see her post was largely made up of random pairs of letters. :dunno: :raspberry: :hug:

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Re: Elessar's Numero Uno Drabble Fic

Postby WarpGirl » Mon Jan 24, 2011 3:56 pm

Oh Cogito, Which one? :oops:

SB I concur with jT if that was supposed to be an alternate universe, of the universe shown on TV it is a little out of whack. However if it was a part of the Mirror Universe, it makes perfect sense.
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Re: Elessar's Numero Uno Drabble Fic

Postby Cogito » Mon Jan 24, 2011 4:17 pm

WarpGirl wrote:Oh Cogito, Which one? :oops:


It took me a while to find it, but it was in the "Star Trek Valentine Issue" thread. You said a lot of stuff like this, which left me completely baffled:

"But I'm still all for P/C and J/C but only P/C can technically count."

It's English, Jim, but not as we know it. ;)

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Re: Elessar's Numero Uno Drabble Fic

Postby Silverbullet » Mon Jan 24, 2011 5:39 pm

JT, an AU can be good, bad or a mix. In a mix it is not necessary that the characters are the same as in the RU. But yes, it could be MU whatever you choose to read it as.

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Re: Elessar's Numero Uno Drabble Fic

Postby Silverbullet » Wed Jan 26, 2011 11:55 pm

Double Post. Here is a novelty drabble



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Hed diddle, diddle


"Hey diddle, diddle, the Cat and the fiddle
Trip ws over thee moon
Porthos laughed to see such sport
and T'Pol ran off with her engineer groom

"Hey diddle, diddle the Cat and the Fiddle
Trip was over the Moon
Archer said hurry, hurry you must leave soon
Trip and T'Pol left on thier Honeymoon

Hey diddle, diddle, the Cat and the Fiddle
Ttrip and T’Pol were over Moon
The got a bundle of joy
Chip was a bouncing baby Boy

Hey diddle, diddle, the Cat and the fiddle
Trip and T’Pol were over the Moon
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Re: Elessar's Numero Uno Drabble Fic

Postby Distracted » Thu Jan 27, 2011 2:43 am

It's a nursery rhyme filk. :shock:

Very original, SB.
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Re: Elessar's Numero Uno Drabble Fic

Postby WarpGirl » Thu Jan 27, 2011 2:47 am

Is it 100 words? I remember someone did a ficlet to Good Night Moon it was one of my favorites.
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Re: Elessar's Numero Uno Drabble Fic

Postby Silverbullet » Thu Jan 27, 2011 3:10 am

WG. yes exactly 100 words.

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Re: Elessar's Numero Uno Drabble Fic

Postby WarpGirl » Thu Jan 27, 2011 3:13 am

cool! :hug:
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Re: Elessar's Numero Uno Drabble Fic

Postby Silverbullet » Thu Jan 27, 2011 4:23 pm

Here is an unedited Drabble that is a few words over 100, sorry



The Prisoners story

I show him a façade without emotion or even pity

I would shout

“I love him, I love him, he is mine for all eternity”

Yet

My voice is neutral without warmth, filling him with uncertainty

I know,

The Prison which binds me, the walls and bars are of my own making.

Because

Each stone is chipped from my Heart and each bar is tears from my eyes unshed.

He looks

In my eyes but the bars there will not reveal what is in them.

So

My Prison with walls of stone and bars of Steel unknown

Still

Keeps me from the one who loves me and I love him
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Re: Elessar's Numero Uno Drabble Fic

Postby WarpGirl » Thu Jan 27, 2011 5:15 pm

I think it is an interesting piece. But as so often happens with these types of character sketches on :tpol: I'm alway left feeling that she's given more than her fair share of the blame. :trip: never told :tpol: that he loved her. Not once! :trip: admitted to T'Les that he was in love with :tpol: but he kept silent to her as well. So if :tpol: was shackled in a metaphorical prison so was :trip: maybe the reasons were different but it's true.

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Re: Elessar's Numero Uno Drabble Fic

Postby Silverbullet » Thu Jan 27, 2011 5:45 pm

WG, at the end she says he Loves her. she knew it. What she was saying is that she could not rspond the way she should. Thhat she wanted to. In the series her tone was always neutral and without warmth. Only in the forgotten was there compassion in it. She is held prisoner by her background, training and customs. So she says her prison is of her own making.

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