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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Alelou » Mon Feb 27, 2012 6:19 pm

Extinction?
OMG, ANOTHER new chapter! NORTH STAR Chapter 28
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby lfvoy » Mon Feb 27, 2012 11:29 pm

Chosen Realm. I was thinking about the one day difference in the aliens' creation myths, the tattoos on their faces, and the fact that they were willing to destroy their own fellows for the sake of their beliefs.

*blush* Guess I'm weird that way or something. Here's another one.

He does not see me --
Too focused on his rival.
That is his mistake.
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Cogito » Mon Feb 27, 2012 11:43 pm

lfvoy wrote:Chosen Realm. I was thinking about the one day difference in the aliens' creation myths, the tattoos on their faces, and the fact that they were willing to destroy their own fellows for the sake of their beliefs.

*blush* Guess I'm weird that way or something.


Not at all - I thought it was a great idea, but I'm not clever enough to write a haiku in the time I have available so I have to stay out of the challenge at the moment.

lfvoy wrote:He does not see me --
Too focused on his rival.
That is his mistake.


This one, though, is fascinating. I think this is going to need some cogitation.

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Alelou » Tue Feb 28, 2012 1:15 am

lfvoy wrote:Chosen Realm. I was thinking about the one day difference in the aliens' creation myths, the tattoos on their faces, and the fact that they were willing to destroy their own fellows for the sake of their beliefs.

*blush* Guess I'm weird that way or something. Here's another one.


You're not weird. You must remember that episode a heck of a lot better than I do. (It's these funky TnT glasses ... they blur everything else!)
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Kotik » Wed Feb 29, 2012 8:52 am

lfvoy wrote:He does not see me --
Too focused on his rival.
That is his mistake.


Could that be princess Kaitaama before she rearranges the alien abductor's hairdo with the big ol' branch on that swamp planet?

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby lfvoy » Wed Feb 29, 2012 11:07 am

Nope. I'm still busy in the third season over here. :)
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Alelou » Wed Feb 29, 2012 11:44 am

Extinction?
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Cogito » Wed Feb 29, 2012 1:45 pm

lfvoy wrote:Nope. I'm still busy in the third season over here. :)


Well that's a surprise, because I was nodding to myself when I saw Kotik's answer.

But now Kotik has got me thinking along those lines, I wonder: Is it T'Pol neck-pinching that MACO during their mutiny in Hatchery?

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby lfvoy » Wed Feb 29, 2012 10:56 pm

Well the episode was "Hatchery," so you win and you're up, Cogito.

But I was actually thinking about Travis surprising Hayes long enough to take him down and give T'Pol and Malcolm time to gain the upper hand.
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Cogito » Wed Feb 29, 2012 11:29 pm

Well, in that case I feel like a bit of a fraud, but with my 'haiku' track record I have to take any win I can get.

Here is one which will be either blindingly obvious, or utterly baffling - and I have no idea which.



Trust, friendship betrayed.
Unexpected assault, then
I wake up in hell.

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby putaro » Thu Mar 01, 2012 10:54 am

Well, it's not blindingly obvious. I'll take a stab. Strategem?
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Kotik » Thu Mar 01, 2012 11:01 am

Sign me up for the baffled crew. :lol:

Could that be Degra, being stabbed by Dolim?

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Cogito » Thu Mar 01, 2012 11:48 am

putaro wrote:Well, it's not blindingly obvious. I'll take a stab. Strategem?


Kotik wrote:Sign me up for the baffled crew. :lol:

Could that be Degra, being stabbed by Dolim?


No to both, although you're in the right season.

Here's a clue: Neither of the people involved in the assault are members of starfleet.

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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby panyasan » Thu Mar 01, 2012 3:44 pm

Impulse? The hell is the ship Seleya and the betrayal is Trellium-D.
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Re: The Short SHORT version

Postby Cogito » Thu Mar 01, 2012 3:52 pm

panyasan wrote:Impulse? The hell is the ship Seleya and the betrayal is Trellium-D.


That's very imaginative. I'm afraid I'm far more literally-minded!

The assault was a physical assault. (No, 'hell' wasn't literal!)

Here's another clue: Neither of the people involved have ever been on Enterprise.


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