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Postby WarpGirl » Fri Aug 13, 2010 3:57 pm

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Postby Linda » Sat Aug 14, 2010 2:11 am

Okay, no hurry.
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Postby panyasan » Thu Aug 19, 2010 6:45 pm

I am looking for a beta for a story I have written. Pdsld has challenged me to take any episode or any situation within an episode, in season 3 or 4, that has underlying humor in it but the original writers failed to develop it, and expand on it or rewrite it to show the humor they missed. After toying with several ideas, I wrote a missing scene which takes place after Bound. I hope I hit the humor button right, so if any one would have a look, please let me know.
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Postby Misplaced » Thu Aug 19, 2010 10:27 pm

panyasan wrote:I am looking for a beta for a story I have written. Pdsld has challenged me to take any episode or any situation within an episode, in season 3 or 4, that has underlying humor in it but the original writers failed to develop it, and expand on it or rewrite it to show the humor they missed. After toying with several ideas, I wrote a missing scene which takes place after Bound. I hope I hit the humor button right, so if any one would have a look, please let me know.


I'm up for it. ;) PM me if you'd like me to beta!
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Postby panyasan » Fri Aug 20, 2010 4:04 am

Some body else also offered - but thank you for the offer.
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Chapter 17 of Word of Ice is up!

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Postby Misplaced » Sat Aug 21, 2010 8:01 pm

Alrighty... I'm looking for a beta again... not for Dark Echoes (got one already).

I accepted a challenge that Distracted laid at my feet (with a caveat added by Rigel Kent) and I'm ready for a beta for the first chapter. (Don't worry it's not going to be as long as Reflections!) It would be great if said beta would be willing to do the rest of the story as well... which I anticipate would be only two or three more chapters -- and I already have a good outline of the story.

PM me or reply here. I'd love to get this out there soon. Thank you!!
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Postby ginamr » Fri Sep 03, 2010 7:40 am

Hey, I need a beta for my whole story "Coming Home". Anyone interested?
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Postby Misplaced » Tue Sep 07, 2010 5:00 pm

Alright... I like to have several irons in the fire at once. And sometimes a ficlet comes out begging to be written while I'm stalled on another project.

I'm looking for a beta for an MU ficlet. However it is a sequel (sort of) to another that I have recently posted at ff.net (and will be posted here soon too). So if you're interested and can get back to me within a couple of days (it's about 6,000 words) and willing to read the other ("Goh Veh") to see where I'm coming from as a writer. Then I'd love to ask for your help. :)

PM me!

Thanks!

ETA: It is not a comedy with an exaggeration of the wickedness like "Unexpect This!"... it's actually less crude and has less language and I don't write NC-17. Dunno if that makes a difference, since I know that most aren't big on the MU.
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Postby Brandyjane » Sat Oct 02, 2010 3:26 pm

I need a beta for a multi-chapter story I'm writing about T'Pol and T'Les's back story. So far I've only written the first chapter, and it's pretty short. I need someone to tell me if my ideas makes sense and to double check to make sure I didn't make any really obvious, dumb mistakes.

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Postby MicioGatta » Mon Oct 04, 2010 8:34 pm

Hi everyone!

PS. All my stories all mostly about Trip e T'Pol.
They still be readable in Italian here: http://fabuland.wordpress.com/2010/08/08/i-naviganti/ and here: http://www.trekportal.it/tpforum/showthread.php?t=15970 .
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Postby Dbear » Thu Oct 21, 2010 11:43 pm

This is my first FANFIC I was wondering if anyone would be kind enough to do a beta reading. I already posted it on FanFiction.net, here is the link to it. Welcome any help.

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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6405806/1/Speech_of_a_Lifetime

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Postby Distracted » Fri Oct 22, 2010 1:13 am

Cute story. Definitely has potential. I'm sorry I don't have the time to beta it. :?
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Postby panyasan » Sat Nov 06, 2010 10:13 pm

I have written a short TnT story (4-5 pages) about the episode Harbinger, R-rated. It's already been beta-ed, but my beta suggested that some one would have another look (a fresh set of eyes), especially when it comes to the language. If any one is interested, please pm me.
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Chapter 17 of Word of Ice is up!

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8522099/17/World-of-Ice

The Naked Truth and other necessities of life

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12056258/1 ... es-of-life

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Postby Kotik » Tue Nov 09, 2010 5:52 pm

Since "Broken Bow, Part II" after many delays is finally getting completed, I'd like to have a second Beta. Not because I don't trust aadarshinah, on the contrary, but I need someone with a good attention to small details, as I strive to leave less plotholes than the original. The chapter is also BIG (30 pages), so I feel uncomfortable leaving aadarshinah in a sysiphos position.

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Postby Pennjazz » Mon Mar 28, 2011 4:21 am

Hello...I have a oneshot story (About 2-3 pages) that I am having a problem finishing and could use the help of a beta...the story is on the border of R and NC-17, although I was trying to lean toward the R rating, due to I just suck writing (and am a bit shy) trying to be that "specific"... :lol: (Besides, isn't what our imagination comes up with usually better than what can be written... ;-) )


If you are interested in helping, drop me a line... ;-) Thanks... :D


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