I hadn't realized it was so long since I did anything with this story. And even longer since I posted about it.
I sent in part 9 of Payment a day ago. Presumably it will get posted as soon as someone gets enough time away from RL to get the chance. All feedback is welcome.
Payment MU story thread
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"When the legends die, the dreams end. When the dreams end, there is no more greatness."
--Tecumseh
"It is better to be a live jackal than a dead lion."
--King Solomon the Wise
"The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few." Unless the few are armed.
--Tecumseh
"It is better to be a live jackal than a dead lion."
--King Solomon the Wise
"The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few." Unless the few are armed.
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Yes!
Thank goodness!
It lives!
Thank goodness!
It lives!
Well yes. I continue to write. And on Fanfiction.Net, for those who want, it is possible to cast a glance at my latest efforts. We arrived to
The Ears of the Elves, chapter Forty-four
And here is the beginning of the whole story.
But, I must say, you could also find something else on Fanfiction.net written by me. If you want.
The Ears of the Elves, chapter Forty-four
And here is the beginning of the whole story.
But, I must say, you could also find something else on Fanfiction.net written by me. If you want.
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Waiting...and waiting...and waiting. Where is part 9! 
Working on a major fan fic project. Two-thirds done. Hope to put it up in the not TOO distant future.
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They do have lives you know.
"When the legends die, the dreams end. When the dreams end, there is no more greatness."
--Tecumseh
"It is better to be a live jackal than a dead lion."
--King Solomon the Wise
"The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few." Unless the few are armed.
--Tecumseh
"It is better to be a live jackal than a dead lion."
--King Solomon the Wise
"The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few." Unless the few are armed.
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Shame on them. For havin somethin that takes them away from these idiot boxes/time wasters. 
Cant wait for the update, but I will.
TnT I love em.
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Hey, look, I was not meaning to be unappreciative, just trying to show my eagerness to read the next chapter of this well carfted story. 
Working on a major fan fic project. Two-thirds done. Hope to put it up in the not TOO distant future.
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any minute now...
It's flavored with passionfruit
an appropriate ingredient, don't you think?
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I liked it, and I look forward to the next installment. It's definately an interesting dynamic you've set up with the Vulcans. One wonders though how much V'Lar was hamming it up for Ho-Hoshi though because if the galaxy was as bad as she made it out to be, why would Vulcan have ever bothered to land on Earth and attempt to make first contact as we were shown in part I of IaMD. I'm also a little confused about who got shot. I'm assuming one of the Vulcans. Anyway, looking forward to the next installment.
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Well, the Empire Humans aren't really chummy with each other. But they don't stand around and let any non-Human touch one of their own either.
As far as why they landed? To check out the emerging competition before they got strong enough to be a threat of course.
A bit slow out of the gate on that one...
As far as why they landed? To check out the emerging competition before they got strong enough to be a threat of course.
A bit slow out of the gate on that one...
"When the legends die, the dreams end. When the dreams end, there is no more greatness."
--Tecumseh
"It is better to be a live jackal than a dead lion."
--King Solomon the Wise
"The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few." Unless the few are armed.
--Tecumseh
"It is better to be a live jackal than a dead lion."
--King Solomon the Wise
"The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few." Unless the few are armed.
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I really enjoyed that! Thank you!
I too got the impression that V'Lar was spinning a bit of a story as a last attempt at getting out of being executed and prove that Vulcan is Loyal to the empire, and only some stupid kids were out there causing trouble. I thought they tried to sap her brain because they couldn't bare seeing her like that. Did they try and sap her brain there, in the end, or have i miss read that?
I too got the impression that V'Lar was spinning a bit of a story as a last attempt at getting out of being executed and prove that Vulcan is Loyal to the empire, and only some stupid kids were out there causing trouble. I thought they tried to sap her brain because they couldn't bare seeing her like that. Did they try and sap her brain there, in the end, or have i miss read that?
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Wait and see. 
"When the legends die, the dreams end. When the dreams end, there is no more greatness."
--Tecumseh
"It is better to be a live jackal than a dead lion."
--King Solomon the Wise
"The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few." Unless the few are armed.
--Tecumseh
"It is better to be a live jackal than a dead lion."
--King Solomon the Wise
"The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few." Unless the few are armed.
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Well while I loved that speach V'Lar gave to T'pol.Some how I see the Perfect Trek universe for Earth beign somewhere half way Between the Real Universe, an the MU. One where Starfleet is a True Millitary whose soul perpose is defence, where exploration comes 2nd to common sence, but one where were not bent on complete power over the Galaxy. IMO both universes are aiming twards self destruction, The MU cause their to power hungry, an the "RU" cause they lack all common sence. An are bound to get them selves wiped out one day.
I loved the part where the engineers sliced the heads off those body guards, quicker then a horse can switch its tail.
What Im eager to see, is what the Heck Tucker is up to? an what his plans are for the Defiants Command Codes?
TnT I love em.
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I have already given several hints about what Tucker really wants. Consider where he came from, what he is doing now and why he is doing it. You should be able to figure out what is objectives are.
"When the legends die, the dreams end. When the dreams end, there is no more greatness."
--Tecumseh
"It is better to be a live jackal than a dead lion."
--King Solomon the Wise
"The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few." Unless the few are armed.
--Tecumseh
"It is better to be a live jackal than a dead lion."
--King Solomon the Wise
"The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few." Unless the few are armed.
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