"All the Pretty Little Ponies"

[Pegmumm]

Just a note to clarify the Pretty Ponies timeline.

Elizabeth, Paxton's experiment, is still in Trip's future in the earlier series. Resurrection is now at Season 4, episode 3. Paxton is another year down that timeline. Hence the confusion. She hasn't yet been born for the earlier Trip and T'Pol.

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[Aquarius]

Okay wait-----

This isn't one of those things where each one is losing their partner at the same time, just in different timelines/dimensions? Like, it's March 24 for both of them, but in one timeline Trip dies, and in the other T'Pol dies? Are you saying that this T'Pol was sent to a few years into the past of the other timeline?

[Pegmumm]

Okay wait-----

This isn't one of those things where each one is losing their partner at the same time, just in different timelines/dimensions?

Yep, they are actually 8 weeks apart, having lost a partner within the last 7 days within their own timelines. Hence each is within days of dying. If it makes it easier, just think of them as being on the same date. It isn't all that pertinent to the story.

It's widow meets widower.
Classic story.
Except their dog doesn't die, they keep the pick up truck and the old girlfriend turns out to be ugly.

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[Pegmumm]

'nuthr chapters up at fanfic
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[Silverbullet]

Peg, just read your Chapter four of your Story all the pretty litle Ponies.

I am about to have an Orgasm. Boy did I LOVE that chapter. I am thhis Boards certified Archer hater.

SB

[Asso]

I have just read it.
RARELY I HAVE READ SUCH A ENTHRALLING STORY.

[Reanok]

Wow!That's one heck of an update I never expected Archer was so evil and twisted. I can't wait to see what happens to Trip & T'Pol's family and them trying to stay one step ahead of the villians in your story.

[Pegmumm]

To quote Inigo Montoya in the Princess Bride...
I do not think it means what you think it means.

[Reanok]

Your story certainly keeps people guessing as to Malcolm and Hoshi and others in Starfleet will try to stop Archer and his cronies from escaping with important computer technology and who they were going to sale the stolen merchandise to on the black market .

[Pegmumm]

Part 5 is up at fanfiction. I'll try to edit it a bit and submit it here in the next day or so.

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[pdsldl]

Pegmumm why do you do your chapters as seperate stories at FF.net? It's confusing to readers and they likely miss multi-chapter stories unless they figure it out and add an alert by author instead of story or look for just-in stories.

[Pegmumm]

It's sheer laziness on my part.
I hate when someone posts a new chapter without putting a date on it and am getting old enough not to remember where the story leaves off.

Since I get confused by it, I think readers do too.
Hence the sheer cussedness of posting it as parts.
Is there a cure that I don't know about?
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[Silverbullet]

Peg, have read part 5 that you posted on FF Net. Will wait until you post it here to put in my comment. The story is certainly exciting.

One question, you have T-Pol's Father as a Romulan.

[pdsldl]

Other than putting a date in chapter title or something no. I usually just go back from the last chapter and re-read the end so I know what's happening. Doing it your way makes it more difficult to know when a story has a new chapter unless you do an author alert. In your case that works because you only do Enterprise stories but only if one knows that or doesn't mind risking multiple emails for fandoms you aren't interested in. Also I'll comment here as I have on other chapters once you post.

It's sheer laziness on my part.
I hate when someone posts a new chapter without putting a date on it and am getting old enough not to remember where the story leaves off.

Since I get confused by it, I think readers do too.
Hence the sheer cussedness of posting it as parts.
Is there a cure that I don't know about?
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