Surak's Paradise

By Linda

Rating: G

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To seek Surak's paradise
Out in the world,
I started in the garden
Sipping tea
With trusting eyes upturned on
My Grandmother's wise, kind face
And spilled out my heart's desires

I found Surak's paradise
A lifetime later,
Back in the garden
Sipping tea
With eyes smiling down upon
My Granddaughter's trusting, loving face
Telling me her deepest secrets


Comments:

shanjeniah

I'm new here, and have only one thing to say - MORE, PLEASE!

Linda

Thanks, guys.  It occurred to me that a good life on war torn Vulcan would be break from war and living long enough to  have children.  Ceastion of war altogether and living long enough to see your grandchildren would be paradise indeed - Surak inspired.

bluetiger

Wonderful. As I always say, It's family that brings meaning.

Asso

WOW!!!:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

justTripn

Awwhh! *wipes away a tear* Bring on the grandchildren!

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