In My Sleep

By Bether

Rating: G

Genres: romance


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A/N: This is just a little something to keep the poetry section going. It seems as if the poems have completely dried up. Here is my attempt at a Kyrielle.


With pure wonder I do embrace
Each slight expression of your face
Dark eyes hold secrets you must keep
And I hear your voice in my sleep.

You speak to me in soothing tone
Your spirit not ever alone
Hidden desires held very deep
And I hear your voice in my sleep.

I feel the love you won’t reveal
For it’s your duty to conceal
I know at times your heart does weep
And I hear your voice in my sleep.


[b][/b]Lovely, really, really nice. Well done, Bether!
Gorgeous, Beth. I hope you have another one in the works ;)
Sad, yet peaceful and very rhythmic. Nice one, Bether.
Oh, this is so sad. And yet - if they can move from sleeping to waking, there's hope. Nicely done. I'm particularly impressed with the repeated rhymes.

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