Missing Scene: Cogenitor

By Silverbullet

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The door chime rang.

"Come in," said Trip.

T'Pol walked in.

"Have you learned the lesson from the harm you have done?"

"I did no harm."

"Yes, the Captain did not get the technology he had hoped for."

"You notice that when they left it seemed to be okay between Archer and their captain, but they didn't leave any technology," Trip said. "They just said that we would find it someday."

"Nevertheless, what you did was wrong."

"You didn't hear me or didn't listen."

"I certainly did."

"No, I told you that I scanned the Cogenitor and that she was as intelligent as the other two sexes."

"That has no bearing on it."

"But it does. She learned to read in a day and in one more day probably would be reading at university level. She learned and mastered Go in a day and beat me easily. I have not lost a game on board in two years and was Go champion in university. I couldn't beat a Go grandmaster but I could give a master a run for his money. Yet Charles had no problem winning. She could learn and become very good at chess, too. You like logic. Go and chess are two of the most logical games on Earth.

"You interfered where you should not have."

"You know what they called Charles?"

"Charles?"

"Yes, she wanted a name and first chose Trip, but I told her that was a nickname. My real name is Charles. She took that one.

"I expect you were flattered."

"Yes, I was. Anyway, they called her 'it,' didn't even let her have a name. She was a convenience, a tool to help them have a baby. Nothing more. Hell, Porthos is treated better than she was.

"That does not matter."

"But it does matter. T'Pol, she was a being; she had rights, basic rights that all beings have. On Earth, we call them Human rights: the right to have a name, to have an education, to be an equal part of her society, to contribute to that society, to be treated with respect and dignity, to be thought of as a being and not a tool."

"Each society is different."

"But aren't certain rights inherent to a being."

"You do not know...."

"T'Pol, there used to be a group on Earth in my country that were like the Cogenitors. Blacks.

"Blacks?"

"Yes, they were held as slaves. Thought of as lazy, shiftless, stupid and cowardly. Fit only to be slaves who were forced to work for their white owners. They were told that they were no good, that they were meant to be slaves. They were given rags to wear and lived in hovels. Forbidden to marry. Given no education because it was thought that it would be useless, or if they did learn they would become 'uppity.' While they could not legally marry they did anyway, illegally. They had children. Families were broken up. Husbands were sold to one owner, the wife to another and the children to a third. Parents would never see their children again.

Some of the Blacks knew better that they weren't meant to be slaves and tried to escape. Most were caught and their hamstrings were cut. Some managed to escape. They were helped by a brave group of Whites who formed an underground railroad and moved them from one hiding spot to another until they reached Canada. Some of the Blacks got an education, learned to read and write. Some became orators and spoke out. Men like Frederick Douglass.

"That is very interesting but....'

"There was a great war fought and near the end of it Blacks were allowed to enlist in the Union army. They fought bravely and honorably. One of the results of that war was slavery was outlawed. The Blacks thought they were given certain rights. The whites used laws to make certain they didn't get those rights. Still some moved West to build a better life.

"In a war fought between Spain and my country there was a group of Blacks commanded by a man named Pershing," Trip continued. "He said that they were the finest troops he had ever commanded. From then on he was known as 'Black Jack Pershing.'

"But there were still lynchings and white-only signs. Minstrel shows mocked Blacks. Finally they had enough in the mid 20th century. They torched a couple cities to get the Whites' attention and kicked in some doors. You know what? It was discovered that Blacks were the same as everyone else; they were no different."

"You still should not have done what you did."

"There was another group: females."

"Females?"

"Yes, once they were universally considered to be property. They had no rights and were used as pawns in the power game. Worked like animals, were only good for breeding children or warming someone's bed. They were told they could not understand things like mathematics. Even later, when they weren't thought of as property, they were still treated as such. They could not own property or have bank accounts. They were told they couldn't manage those things, that a male had to do it for them. Around that time, in some societies when a female married, all she owned became her husband's property.

"This gave rise to 'fortune hunters': men who looked for heiresses, married them, and when the women came into their inheritance, took it for their own." A book. 'Bel Ami,' was written about such a man. He found a woman, married her, took over her wealth, and spent it on gambling and betting on horses. After he spent it all, he left her and started looking for a new victim.

"Women had to fight for every little bit, especially the right to vote. Some died in that fight. There were two large wars fought on Earth in the 20th century. In the second one, the men were sent to fight it and the women moved into what had been traditionally male work. They proved able to do the work as well as the men. However after the war, it was back to 'children, church and kitchen.' But the women talked to their daughters and they rebelled, kicked down doors. They made changes, fought for new opportunities, a different attitude towards them. They started to get near the centers of power.

"T'Pol you wouldn't want to be a slave, to be told you were worthless. Not to have any rights as a person."

"All very interesting, but how does that help the third sex."

"I opened a door for her. Showed her a life and world that she had a right to."

"You opened a door?"

"Yes, a door that showed she was as good as the other two sexes."

"But she was a third sex that was needed for the other two sexes to have a baby."

"Cogenitors could still do that but also do other things for their people and the other two sexes," Trip said. "But that was not the only door I opened. I opened one for you."

"Me!?"

"Yes, remember the time we had that talk in your quarters about going back to marry Koss, and I said that there was such a thing as personal choice. When I heard you say to Archer that he was Human and had a choice, I knew that you had looked through the door I opened. Not only looked through it, but stepped out of it. T'Pol, if you stay on Enterprise, someday you are going to make a very personal choice that will affect you and maybe others. If you are on board long enough, you will come to think of personal choice as personal freedom and have a right to that. You will not let anyone take it away from you."

Trip thought a minute. "I always wondered what you wrote in that letter you sent to Vulcan. Did you say that you wanted to marry Koss and become a good little Vulcan wife? Or did you say that you would not be returning to Vulcan in the foreseeable future?"

"That is not your concern," said T'Pol. "I do have personal choice."

"Yes, on Vulcan you would choose what robe to wear, what to eat at meals. But the important things that count, you didn't. Who you married was chosen for you. Your place in society as a good Vulcan wife was chosen. Obeying customs and traditions was not your choice but forced on you by Vulcan society.

"You rebelled against the lack of personal choice by joining the High Command intelligence branch, then you left it and went in to the Science Department. You took the assignment on Enterprise and accepted Archer's request to stay on as Science Officer."

Trip smiled. "Tell you what. Chef has made a pecan pie. Let's go to the dining hall and you can make a personal choice, have a slice or not."

"I will go with you to the dining hall because you invited me. It would be rude and illogical for me to decline that invitation."

As they started for the door, Trip said: "T'Pol it wasn't me who drove Charles to suicide. It was the other two sexes. Charles went to them believing that they would accept that she was as intelligent as them and that they would allow her to become an equal in their world. Instead, they slammed that door shut. Charles knew the door would never open again, that she would not be allowed to meet aliens again. Especially Humans. She would go back to being a tool. She did not want that life again so she ended hers.

"What I did, I would do again. I hate the thought of beings held as slaves, called an 'it' and thought of as a tool. Beings denied their basic rights as a Being. T'Pol, doesn't your logic have any empathy in it?"

T'Pol looked at Trip as if she never had seen him before.

"Commander Tucker," she said slowly, "you have more depth than I first thought."

"Come on, T'Pol, that pecan pie is waiting."

Finis

 

 


Comments:

framework4

Delightful tale. I dislike this episode but you really turn it around.

Silverbullet

PD, you are right Trip should have been more carefu if he knew that Charles would take his/her life. He would tell Charles not to tell the other two he (charles) was as intelligent or that he was aware of a better world and life he had a right to. Trip would advise Charles to go back to  his homeworld. What Trip needed was more  information: How did the coginator live when it returned t  its home world. Did it live ina barracks until a new assignment came or if he/she had to wait until those charles was assigned to were ready for Charles.  Did charles wear a sort of Uniform? did  charles have changes of clothes. did Charles carry his own baggage.  Why, so trip could slip  Charles a few paads about reading and a Scanner or two. So charles could teach other Cognitators how to read.

Panysann. T'Pol probably did not know the social history of Earth so Trip had to tell her that there were groups on Earth that had been like the Coginators. He wasn't lecturing so much as teaching her.

panyasan

I liked that you showed what Trip did was making a moral call: all people deserve the freedom to make their own choices and the cognitor was a slave without any right and not seen as a being. I like that you made Trip stick to what believes it's right and not some guilty ridden guy. Archer had a point as well: it was first contact, so you have to be careful. However, you lost me when Trip started lecturing T'Pol like he knows everything. I expect this attitude more of Archer then of Trip.

pdsldl

"What I did, I would do again."  I don't beleive Trip would have said this.  He did blame himself and while he may have still tried to convince them that the cogenitors deserved more rights I  think he would have done approached the problem more carefully and in the open.   I like that your story is more substantial in it's goals to add to an episode and I see the point and you developed the argument well,  But I still think this was too much for these characters.  When I read the words in my own head I can't hear their voices in some of your words.

Silverbullet

Blue tiger, it was Archer who denied Charles Asylum. T'Pol backed him  on this by saying "you are doing the right  thing.  Trip wanted to give Charles asyum. He had Charles in his quarters when ARcher came in and told the cognitator he was sending him/her back  to the vissans.

Trip was innocen of that.

ARcher was too concerned about what he might get out of the vissans to bother about human rights or any rights.

SB

justTripn

Oh, it is also canon that Trip preferred to call the Cogenitor "her":

TUCKER: There was someone else with them. They called her a cogenitor. You know what that is?
T'POL: A third gender. Why do you call it her?
TUCKER: Well, she looks more like a her than a him.

justTrip'n

I think Trip expected everyone to take his side and didn't foresee that Charles might not get asylum. Wait, I think that Trip didn't forsee that Charles would ask for asylum. I might have to watch the episode again. Anyway, I recall that Trip snuck around, knowing he legally had something to hide, but I think he felt totally justified morally and presumed that the Captain (or any Human) would see things the same way he did if he had to explain himself.

bluetiger

I understand what you are saying about slavery in this story, however Trip does come across as rather harsh and militant. His major error would seem to have been no follow through on helping Charles get sanctuary. Maybe if he had found some precedent to argue instead of leaving it to Archer's whim. I just get the feeling he abandon Charles with little regard to it's/his/her fate.

Distracted

The Cogenitor was neither a "she" nor a "he".  The use of the feminine pronoun here is easier, I guess, since English doesn't have a neutral gender pronoun and traditionally people are more accustomed to think of a "she" as a helpless victim, but it still takes me out of the story a little.  I think Trip would have made some attempt to identify Charles more accurately.  I know you don't like the term "it", SB.  Maybe just refer to Charles by name or as "the cogenitor"instead of using the pronoun. Alternatively, common English usage calls for the use of the male pronoun as the gender neutral pronoun, so Charles would be a "he" even if not a male in usual English usage.  Or you could use one of the many invented gender neutral pronouns out there.  I'm sorta partial to "e, em, and eir" instead of he/she, him/her, and his/hers.  Just for accuracy's sake.

Great sociological justification for Trip's actions, by the way.

Alelou

As a polemic in favor of human rights, it works nicely.  As a piece of fiction using characters from Enterprise, I'm afraid I find it a bit too heavy-handed.  

justTrip'n

:D *Cheers wildly* Go Silverbullet! Trip gives a straightforward defense of his actions in Cogenitor. I've never seen this take on the episode. In restrospect it seems like the obvioius approach, but, to my knowldege, no one did it--until now!

I love it! Wonderful.  

Asso

This is among the best missing scenes I have read.
Finally, not inane and repetitive things about reiterative and boring angst, but something SOLID.
THIS is what I want to read when people attempt to display what could have been unsaid in the show.

Mary

Wow, I think that this is the first   fiction to portray this opinion. Usually it has been guilt, remorse despondancy and a desire to undo what was done. I really admire that you've taken  such a different approach. You have Trip being intelligent having thought through his actions and deciding an injustice  is being done regardless of species. He feels deeply in the correctness of his actions and that the blame  lies with a people willing to use or abuse another of their kind. Because thay've done this in the past does not make it right. I read another fic where Trip says " all evil needs to flurish is for good men to do nothing. You have expressed this superbly and I thank you for giving Trip a social conscience

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